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you left me here
in a vague island of nowhere
a no man's land
with no man by my side
I can stare at the TV
for only so long
I can subside the pain
with sitcom reruns
for only so long
This game we play is petty
pointless, without hope
every time I round a corner,
there's hope that you'll spring out
grin in place
giving me assurance you were waiting
there's hope that this IS a game
that you're hiding
in these empty hallways and wrong turns
game or not, I'm It....

I am alone.
let's play a game...
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Chillinvillain's avatar
not bad, on the "grin in place" line i think it might sound cool if you did "grin and pace". Remeber 3 periods make and elipsis unless your using it in certain situations (denotates that you are skipping an entire line when quoting with 4 periods)
polish and refine =D